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the title really spoke to me and as I read the blurb I like the title even more. You described the story as an unwanted gift, something that wasn't good for the main character, and you see in swedish the word for poison is gift.
but since I do feel you have something going here I am going to be a little harsh, only for your own good:
You need to fix your text structure, it is so messy right now that I could hardly focus on... mehr anzeigen
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your writing is supper.
give your hands for me...
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thanks for the advice. i appreciate it ill try harder and see what happens! :-)