BookRix

Great job to the author. I really like your writing style. I suggest you join N0velStar's competition this April. This is open to all...either exclusive or non-exclusive novels.

You have- interesting ideas to say the least. Though the character you made of Harry seems strange. It is true that war can drive you to that and worse.

this book is good so far. they should make it longer, though i luv harry potter though.

i want more

why is it called that? There is no battle!

ok i like the story but hes right you need to do less emo more happy but the sorrow is more hidden instead of obvious like you put it other than tht you would make a good artist just slim down the emo and bump up the happyconfusion

I think that this is a brilliant idea but at the same time, it does not follow with the style or character that we all know to be Harry Potter. He has his weaknesses as we have read in the J.K Rowling books, but I feel this short story portrays a sorry version of Harry. It takes away from the hero complex that is so familiar when one thinks of Harry Potter. An interesting read none the less.

I think that this is a brilliant idea but at the same time, it does not follow with the style or character that we all know to be Harry Potter. He has his weaknesses as we have read in the J.K Rowling books, but I feel this short story portrays a sorry version of Harry. It takes away from the hero complex that is so familiar when one thinks of Harry Potter. An interesting read none the less.

I've been a Harry Potter fan for years now and i always wondered what Harry did during his summers away from Hogwarts. With your great short stories you could write awesome books about that. Just an idea!!