The Sixth Servant

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The Sixth Servant
Abraham had an 17th century writing desk. It held a secret that would take him into the backstreets of the Middle East. His life was in danger. No one was who they said they were. Lies would be thrown about causing more confusion. could Abraham decipher the secret? Could he find his way home? Who was that man in the dark shirt? How could he protect himself now? Where could he go? Hiding wasn;t an option. He would be found. Abraham struggled with what he knew and what he had seen. It just couldn;t be.

  • Horror
  • 1960 Wörter
  • Ab 18 Jahren
  • 35
  • 2
  • Veröffentlichung: 07.01.2011
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jason.ronin

This is very like the old gothic novels where we are fed a lot of information at the start with not a lot happening to move the story along,this is not a bad thing if this is your intention,the Blurb for the story makes the book sound very exciting and intrigueing,I am going to follow this one.The best advice I have been given is to show not tell.This drags the reader into the story quicker. But even so a good read so far.

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