Abel In Paris

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Abel In Paris
This is Abel in Paris, a romantic comedy. The story revolves around Abel McCormick, an award-winning chef and widower and his 11-year old daughter, Sandy. Abel, decides to sell the cafe because of the memories of his deceased wife, Nina and Sandy wins them an all expense paid two-week vacation to Paris, that is Paris, Texas. Abel meets Lilly, a beautiful, French chef and a Cordon Blue School of Cooking graduate. They fall in love but with miscommunications, misunderstandings, some matchmaker by Sandy and just the baggage they both carry, will they ever get together? Tom Campbell is another fellow who tries to sabotage Lilly ad hurt her and Abel. It all culminates in an exciting annual chili cook-off they both enter for different reasons. His as he was paid to by Tom and hers being she needs the money to stay open in her new restaurant. Join them as they go through the trials of falling and staying in love.


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gooduklady

You definitely have a talent for weaving a story, and I was drawn into the lives of Abel and Sandy. Your storyline is good and the pacing and flow are also good. I would advise you to go back to the beginning and correct spelling mistakes and, more importantly, errors in tenses. There are numerous occasions when you use the present tense instead of the past. These are minor and can be cured with good editing. I look forward... mehr anzeigen

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bvhurley

I can hardly wait to find out more! They are off to a great adventure after tragedy and this is a wonderful way to overcome grief for Abel and Sandy. I will be ordering this book soon.

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birdbath63

Very easy read. Descriptions are vivid and realistic, making it easy to insert yourself into the story. Looking forward to reading more! Great job!

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lolaw06

This is good. Im not a reader but I can read this I want to know what happends next. You keep the reader intrested. Good work.
Laura

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stagemanjw

I really appreciated your comments. Thank you so much.'Jeffrey White

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