BookRix

I like this very much. It is a nice inspiring story that’s takes you on the journey through human desire, need, and then the gratification of supply. A few formatting adjustments would make it easier to read.

Wow

story - you captured the despair while leaving hope for God's mercy. This story could also be seen as an allegory in our time of need...p;]

This was making me nervous because I thought that the people would not get the water then they would all die.

but you still have a story there.

You need to break your long narrative up into several paragraphs. Not only will it make it easier for the reader, I think it will add even more dramatic effect to the story.

A nice effort.

You flatter me. Saying you like it best out of all the books you have read. Untrue, but still, very flattering. thanks.

Judy, yes... apparently, according to my fan club... I can write ANYTHING and it is never bad (not true, but okay...). more flattery. I think I may start forming those smile lines... lol.

Sweet! You do have a nice touch with the short story genre, you know. It's good to see you exploring the extent of your talents. =D

it was really good, i really liked it, it was my favorite of all the books i have read. thanx to jazz for the book

Like Lisa said....nice to read something a bit different from your usual dark style.
I liked this story because it shows not only the drought but I can encompass all of man's woes. And yet it also showed that after all there was always that hope.

yeah, my s button on my keyboard at home isn't working well... I need to repalce it soon I think... Thanks. I will see if I can fix that now.

Also, thank you for the kind comment. I should be putting 2 more up today. The two I am putting up are the first two I have ever written (short-story-wise) and I wrote them on monday and Tuesday of this week. LOL.