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I just dont want people to see how big of a slump I am in right now. It is better that people dont know my pain... I dont want to hurt people anymore...

This was a wonderful collection that was an absolute joy to read. My favorites were The Wind Steals Away My Words, The Barrier of Ice, and The Girl With Wings. I would consider putting them in a word picture and hanging them on my wall! They are that good ;)

I'm glad I got to read your poetry. I feel my spirits rising even now as your words sink into my soul and warm my very being :)

Awesome job!
Keep writing!

---RbG

What a lovely collections of small poems. So great that they are attached by a theme.

Beautiful Sunshine and the girl with wings are my favorites. You must keep writing more poetry. Poetry is everywhere and seeing as you're a natural, I expect to see more from you soon.

Good work. keep 'em coming
mum xxx

Lovely limericks. So full of life and peace.

Written with a true poetic mind, these natural poses have endeavored a meaningful message to the reader: that of tranquility and peace of heart; to close your eyes and listen all about to the world and its incredible inhabitants. There is always a need to escape from the rustle and bustle of modern life, and I am glad you share such magnificent images.

For my historical, natural novel I felt I had to start building a log cabin, so that I may listen to the chirping of the birds and sigh of the breeze.

Enjoyable!

My favorite is The Girl With Wings, and she can fly through her lovely poetry.I loved your words.

I am going to be putting the poems up in picture form soon.

I like these very much, dear one. They have a lightness to them...a ray of sunshine in a sometimes-dark world. We all need poems such as these!
Proud of you.
Patrick

How delightful! In appreciation of your very uplifting efforts, here's a limerick for you:

While reading a message from Laz,
I noticed another from Jazz.
I then took the time
To read every rhyme
That she'd written with smiles and pizzazz!

Great job, sweetie! 'D

Jazz,

You have written some very nice limericks. The one that stands out most for me is "Beautiful Sunshine".

Very good writing. Keep up the good work!

Tonya