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These really are extremely well written. Especially since you haven't been at it too long. It's a lot easier to write poetry when you're going through a hard time. The most important thing to remember is that you are never alone. It may feel like it sometimes but you aren't. You seem to know that there is still hope though so i don't need to tell you that. The first poem the world is screwed up i think was the title sounds like a poem i had to write for school lol. We had to right our opinion on the world and mine was similar sounding. MY favorite was She Pretends to Feel Nothing because it's relate able. Lots of teenagers put on a mask everyday and pretend to be okay. That's something we all have to do from time to time. Your poetry is very dark, but it's elegant and not whiny. You aren't just going on about how your life sucks. You act as though you are trying not to give up which just gives it a sophistication. Anyways beautiful as always. Just beautiful

I loved when you wrote that there is still time for change and there there is hope. I've always felt that if people as a whole just worked towards something positive we can all make a change. And perhaps writing ideas down is the beginning of a positive change

I know you can't see or feel it now, but you are never alone, He is with you! I hope that you will reach out to people who want to be there for you.
I'm sad for what you are coping with, just let others be there for you. :)

I am hurting even more right now after I made a terrible discovery... looks like I am making a new poetry book already...

I cried when I read your life in these poems.

They do not understand. I know it is like a cancer eating away at you. A cancer that cannot be cut out.

My prayers are with you. If they read your poems, I hope they will begin to see the pain you live with each day.

I know now you are so sincere and true to your word.

Your words are filled with pain, but also with beauty, and truth.

My prayers are with you. Lol.
revkenr