Hello. ︀How ︀are ︀you? ︀I ︀need ︀a ︀friend, ︀open ︀link ︀>>>>> www.date4fuq.com?_ebook-jasmine-paddock-nature
- Permalink
- Kommentieren
- Kommentare sind geschlossen
I find these poems harder to read than your collection titled PAIN. In these I can sense your longing for freedom. And I can relate, although in a different way. I have RA and the pain often kicks my butt. I often feel trapped and alone, and to be honest when I read WIND I cried, it really captures the longing I know and feel daily. You are very talented. I absolutely love these poems!
- Permalink
- Kommentieren
- Kommentare sind geschlossen
You are quite talented, keep writing! :)
- Permalink
- Kommentieren
- Kommentare sind geschlossen
Your poems created visions in my minds eye. Beautifully written.
Chris
- Permalink
- Kommentieren
- Kommentare sind geschlossen
Thanks.
I don't write much rough poetry because I like each line to flow smoothly into the next.
- Permalink
- Kommentieren
- Kommentare sind geschlossen
WHERE!!!!! AHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!! (I cannot stand misspelling anything.)
- Permalink
- Kommentieren
- Kommentare sind geschlossen
First of all, your cover is excellent and speaks to the three poems wonderfully, I think.
But secondly, I was expecting something very rough. I was so surprised! Your formatting of the poems works in a nice way, heightening the impact of the thoughts.
Your images are splendid. You have a knack for using the right words to play them up:)
All three are unified in their theme. Very GOOD writing for someone so young. Kudos.
I think I... mehr anzeigen
- Permalink
- Kommentieren
- Kommentare sind geschlossen
I didn't have any inspiration, at least not any people. I just use the feelings I have and put them into my poems. Some take a few minutes, while one poem I made was short but took 2 hours to make because I wanted to make it perfect.
- Permalink
- Kommentieren
- Kommentare sind geschlossen
That was really good! Where did you get your inspiration from. The description was great too.
- Permalink
- Kommentieren
- Kommentare sind geschlossen
Hello. ︀How ︀are ︀you? ︀I ︀need ︀a ︀friend, ︀open ︀link ︀>>>>> www.date4fuq.com?stormstar1_1319836495.5459051132