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Joe,

Forgive me for the name slip. For some reason I typed John instead of Joe. Does that mean anything? Probably not.

My request for your review is very sincere.

Let me know.

Hi Elizabeth,

May a use your review of Swish (or appropriate portions of it) on my website about the book.

Thanks much!
Janice

Hey John,

May I have your permission to use your review (or a portion of it) on my website about the book.

I'd appreciate it much!

Janice

It is nicer than the one provided plus there is another story on here with that old cover...I'm glad to see this going into a series and your personification of squirrels is great; each having a distinct character!

I know, because my dog character's never 'stop talking' either.

Looking forward to the rest of this story...Paula

That was a great story! I was on the edge of my seat reading it. You made me forget that these were squirrels and not humans fighting for their life. Very well done. The only suggestion I would make is the over use of commas at the beginning. After I got into the story the comma issue became invisible. Great job! STAR!!

I'm so happy you enjoyed the story. The idea has been on my mind for a few weeks and because I knew it would be a shorter story than my first book, I decided to write it before moving on to the second book of my "Bitty" series. Swish took me two days to write--it was great fun! I will continue to make improvements as they come to me or from suggestions from my friends. I'll be working on the illustrations next.
Best!

Hi Janice, what a lovely read, I enjoyed the story with the eyes of an eager child. Wa do! I loved the premise of the story, and a life lesson that would surely resonate with inquisitive children. And, too, there is a great demand for intelligent childrens stories. You write with the mind of a child, yet the wisdom of an adult. I found only a few places needing attention, the kind easily remedied. For me, I didn't let those keep me from seeing the perfection of the story itself, and only saw the appeal of the work as a whole. Thanks for the read! Elizabeth