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Your prose is great. we have the same type of humor and simplicity. This works well. I have voted and saved it to favs. Read my "WHITE DOWN AND "DEER ELK:LETTER"./joeparente
PS: I especially liked 'Where it isn't really needed' and 'St. Isley' /joeparente
This is the last chance to read and comment and possibly vote on my
winter contest entry. If you have read "WHITE DOWN" or "DEER
ELK:LETTER" please accept my heart felt thanks. I appreciate your
comments and votes that you have been kind enough to give. The link to
reading is as follows:
http://www.bookrix.com/_title-en-joe-parente-white-down
http://www.bookrix.com/_title-en-joe-parente-deer-elk-letter

Hi, I made a note of these poems in particular: Scarf (well described, wrapping around the point), Jan18th (a good topic), Haiku (striking simplicity), My Conformity, The Problem with Painting, Sanctus Solemn...

I enjoyed your structured poems less, as rhythms did not always flow comfortably, but really loved your expression. Great choices of words, excellent poetic communication.

Thank you for participating in our
poetry writing contest "Winter & Poems".

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