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The book is great, I love it! I wish I could read more it's getting interesting, I do know how it is though when it's getting interesting and you can't think of anything else.
Also it does need proof reading and if you'd like I or my mom, or both of us, could be your proof reader(s)!
Please keep on writing!
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one suggestion? limit the amount of explanation points. not all of those sentences or quotes require one. too many, and they lose value :(
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I see I need a little proof reading in that paragragh above this, I'm doing this on a tablet thing, so I have the keyboard on the touch screen :-( :-)
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