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I will recommend this wise little story to my grand children.
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Nice imaginative tale with lots of color and descriptions that children will love...and of course (since we are older and HAVE to do this) - a moral at the end. Ha Ha. I really enjoyed it and sent you a private message indicating a couple of typos you may have overlooked which, when fixed, will make your story perfect. Good job Jack.
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Glad you liked it
Thanks for heads up on typos.
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I have not tested it on my grandchildren yet. It's still a work in progress. I wanted to submit it to the children's reading project that BookRix is sponsoring.LoL
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cute story, have you tested it on your grandchildren?
Laz
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I hope your grandkids like it.
I havn't shown it to my gtandkids yet.let me know please.
Thank you.
Jack
I hope your grandkids like it.
I havn't shown it to my gtandkids yet.let me know please.
Thank you.
Jack
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