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Brilliant and delightfully wicked. I love frog's legs!!

good book! i love frogs!!!

I laughed out loud at the ending. Brilliant. :)

Well, well, well... I am humored! This is what I call a well told story. And though the dialogue between the fly and frog was a bit stiff, I loved it! I wonder how many frogs that fly has gotten... This could be the beginning of many adventures between the fly and his accomplice!

The only problem I have with the story is that it is a tad awkward to read in present-tense. I know it is my personal preference to read stories written in past-tense, so I am one sided. That said, I would've loved it ever more is it has been in past-tense ;)

Otherwise, this was outstanding! You are quite the story telling, and I must say, came up with a superb ending! Who would've thought of that? I know I couldn't have ;)

Bravo!

Awesome job!
Keep writing!

---RbG

Great story Jack, loved the ending. I'm with John, this should be included in a children's book or something. Nobody does Flash better than Jack!

I loved this cute short story - it really proves that we should treat others as we want to be treated :)

This was a delight to read. But they need to work on their timing just in case the next frog doesn't care to listen so long.

As usual, Mr Ivey, packs a lot of fun into a little story. It's what writing Flash Fiction is all about.

And few people do it better than he does.

That was awesome! I can't stop smiling:-D Very cute, I love it:)

this was probably one of the most adorably funny and whimsical stories I've read today. I'm glad that I took the time to read your very short story and I am also glad that you gave the story such an interesting twist at the end. I absolutely loved this.