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Congratulations Jenna,

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I enjoyed the tale of the wise king, the wiser old man counsellor, and the nasty dragon. It contains all the elements of a good mythic adventure. I will use it to read to my grandchildren:)

Perhaps (here I go, lol) you might consider not using the year 2075. You didn't say the story takes place on Earth, but I saw it that way. Projecting forward to 2075 on Earth, I see a much different world than valleys inhabited by villages; kingdoms ruled by kings. Also, maybe lengthen the ending scene just a smidgen? I would love to see a more pronounced battle. THAT is the importance of everything preceding.

Anyway...welcome to Aragosia.

but I am at page 11, and think you have done a great job so far. I will finish reading this book in September... I hope.