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Very good book. I enjoyed it.

REALLY GOT INTO THIS STORTY JUST WISH IT WAS LONGER. BUT OVER ALL GOOD READ

I loved it! It was intriguingly interesting! A great indite...had to add as a favorite.

John, As always, great storytelling and your writing style is superb. I felt Adam's nervousness in the hotel room as he flustered with his clothing, checking the clock, flustering some more. Sad, but satisfying read.

I too guessed what was coming (more or less) but it did not (in any way) spoil my enjoyment. Nice to see the dodgy attorney and Adam's evil brother get their comeuppance.
Some great (original sounding) metaphors too: whore in a church; she was the fountain... etc
Sex scenes (always difficult) were well handled and not too explicit.
Some humor too: like the Mutt and Jeff reference.
Your handling of Jessica's way of speaking was very convincing; made me smile.
Although the story has sad aspects, it's very uplifting. Would recommend it to anyone. Especially if they are feeling a bit down and need cheering up. Great book-cover too.
And nice touch: ending with the tangerine reference : )
Well done, John. Looking forward to reading more of your stories. Good to see there's plenty to choose from : )

awe !! this was soooo good!

I liked it, I thought it was very good and well written. Although I totally guessed what she was from a mile away, it was still a very sweet and satisfying story. It's one of those stories that is just meant to make you feel good, and that's fine with me. Good job. ^_^

Gabriella Marguerite Duchene. Her name is a throaty purr of satisfaction...much like this story.

John, at first I felt the sentences though structured well, seemed too long. This only lasted for a split second when I realized I was thinking, ("My God, Adam is all over the place. Is he nervous or something?") is exactly the snapshot you'd written. Nicely done. :-)

It isn't easy to run the gamut of life's journey within a few pages, but it's done beautifully here. From Adam's scattered poignant anticipation to the innocence of a child's eye view, "You Get What You Pay For" is a bounty for the heart, mind and soul.

amazing book its so sad that he died and the ending was pretty cool!

WHAT THE HECK??????????????!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!