Intriguing little story that kept pulling at my interest. Especially liked the tie in to the first line to the last line of the story. Good Job!
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This was beautiful, clever, relatable, and simply wonderful! Another magnificent work!
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Thank you, Judy. A compliment from you carries a lot of weight and is greatly appreciated!
I really enjoyed this story. Good work.
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Thank you. You might also like "The Automated Repayment Plan."
Good story, I like it.
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Thank you Eric, I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Hello, stranger, It's been a while! I'm glad you enjoyed the story. There's a huge thread of truth in the tale. The setting does exist; the lake home and cabin are now owned by my cousin, and my sister and I did spend numerous summers at the cabin when we were kids. I was... mehr anzeigen
Hello, stranger, It's been a while! I'm glad you enjoyed the story. There's a huge thread of truth in the tale. The setting does exist; the lake home and cabin are now owned by my cousin, and my sister and I did spend numerous summers at the cabin when we were kids. I was inspired to write the story, with considerable embellishment, of course, after we visited there last summer.
They say to always write about what you know to give it a genuine feel. You did just that it sounds like. :)