Would love to download this to read!
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I'd like to read more of this. I think it would really go far in a series or something but that's my opinion.
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Showing the world in another view like the "Terminator" move... Pretty fascinating, there are some reports which say that some robots have build an own system...
However, it's really an a Armageddon!
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I thought this would also make a great first chapter for a longer work. What do you say, John? You've already got us all hooked. What happens next? Great job!
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Thanks, I don't know if you were joking, but now that you mention it, it would make a good premise for a longer story. I'll have to put it on a back burner and let it simmer....
Not a joke at all John! I really think it has potential... simmer away!
Amazing! Shouldn't have even bothered entering after reading this awesomeness.
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Thank you for the thumbs-up. But as excellent a writer as you are, I'd keep writing and entering everything I could as often as I could. You're one of those that one day I'll be talking to someone, see your best seller and say, "Hey, I knew her back when..."
Naw. That was the little boost I needed this morning. Thanks!
holy cow....that really threw me for a spin! Choosing a winner for this contest is going to be tough if other stories are on this level.
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Thanks, Angele, that was my first shot at Sci-Fi, and flash fiction to boot. Unfortunately, it's up against some really good stories, but it was fun.
Amazing John! Truly amazing!
Hands up, I surrender!
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Never surrender, you're too good a writer for that.
That's great :) I love it ^.^
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Thanks, Arooha, that was my first shot at Sci-Fi.
I tried too for this contest but I failed. I really dont like Science fiction. Your story is great. thumbs up!
AWESOME. I will NOT - repeat NOT be entering this contest now! Great job, John. Really!
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Come on now, you weren't going to enter anyway, Avery. But thanks for the 'attaboy'.
Looks like the competition for this contest just got a bit stiffer. Great job.
Good luck in the contest.
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Ken, you gave me inspiration with you ant-bots idea. Just following your lead, pal.
The thought has crossed my mind.