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This was a hauntingly enchanting story. I never expected that twist at the end.
This story would be perfection if you had someone help proofread it. The dialogue was a bit confusing due to grammar and punctuation, but apart from that, this was great. :)
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A good simple sad story.
It needs someone to correct the grammar and spelling. That would make it perfect.
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