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I really like your book. There are a few things you need to work on such as sentence structure. Instead of using and all the time you could use other conjunctions or commas. Sometimes over using "And" makes the flow of sentences sound confusing. Also on page 6 I think "It didn't appear that way" sounds better than "ways." This book has great potential. I will read some more later.

I am glad that you have enjoyed my two books to this collection, and yes, there are three more books to this collection, but they still need some more editing. I will post up one book at a time once they have been edited.

Is there a book 3????
It was deffiantly nice short stories, them being cut into 2 short books mean they dont drag on and bore the reader :)
Like i said before, really cute...oh and a cat ridin a dog! FUNNY :D