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Very nice I must say! You had me on the edge of my seat!

Please consider editing page 8. Instead of They. Change to They are.

I really liked the story, especially when I read page 9 and realized you were talking about a basketball. Very surprising and well written. I look forward to reading more of your work.

Excellent writing. :)

That was awesome! The ending took me totally by surprise, and story was extremely well-told. Hope others take the time to read this - it's worth it!