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Ida falls in love with a dark creature. It's impossible to have a relation with a person who collects souls for death angels but will that matter to her when she is in unconditional love with him.

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You are doing great! The punctuation was so much better. Sentence structure getting better. Still struggling with the right flow of the wording, still missing some joiners like 'the' 'and' and a few others. Good picture, great story idea, like the hook. Such an imagination Hima! Want to see where this story goes. Robynn

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Love your idea for a book and the cover, plz keep me posted ;)

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