Very good story to bad no ending. Maybe someday you will finish, hope so
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omg i loved it please finish writing it!!!!!:]
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I love it. It's pure imagination. Finish it up please :).
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I haven’t finished reading it, but you’ve started with a good dialogue. I saved it in my favorites for future read. Just continue to write from your heart. Have a great week!
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You are getting so good! Much better in sentence structure. You are such a natural story teller. You keep it moving, with just enough suspense. You do well at developing the characters. Good job on the dialog. I immensely enjoy your imagination! Keep up the good work! Robynn
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I love the book pleas update me when you write more
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plz keep writing this and all alone
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