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please write more soon!!!

write more plezz write more

write more plezz write more

write more plezz write more

write more plezz write more

write more plezzzz its really good

write more plezzzz its really good

write more plezz

My My Hima! You really have come so far as a writer in a short time. Your sentence structure is so much better. You have done an excellent job with punctuation and dialog. You start strong with action and the mystery of who saved her. You introduce your characters quickly, with just enough back story. You bring in conflict early with Alan, and a friend with Ron. Their love plot is fun and meshes the relationships well. Nice job Hima, keep writing on this one. Robynn

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