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it's beautiful :)

Heather, I just wanted to say that this book was absolutely beautiful. It flowed so smoothly and nearly reduced me to tears several times. This was beautifully written and I am surprised you have not gotten more reviews on this. I could feel the main character's pain as if it was my own. Very skillful writing. I wouldn't change a thing, except, perhaps, make the ending not so sad. The ending nearly broke my heart. I am surprised I did not burst into tears when I read the end. Wow. Keep up the amazing work Heather.

~Jazz

Read the first chapter... will come back for more. Sounds good so far... :)

I have to agree with the previous post. You definitely have a well organized voice. You have mastered how to write conversation between two characters and keep it fast paced. You provided a good opening with an immediate problem that Skye was in the process of working out. You continue to provide good conflict with boyfriend issues, mother issues, father issues and life choice issues. You pace it well, keeping the reader engaged. You have made a few beginner mistakes such as switching Point Of Views. But overall you have written well a fine beginning for a novel. Good job. Robynn

In fact, I couldn't stop reading it. Very, very, very well-done. What a beautifully told tale, poignant yet not over-dramatic or self-indulgent. Your style is smooth and easy to read, and you've mastered the art of the short story in ways that I doubt I ever will but wish I could. Bravo, and thank you for posting one of the best-written stories on the site. I sincerely hope you decide to share more of your excellent work!