BookRix

I'm loving it so far, keep adding more!

thanks i tend to do that "are" insted of "our" thing its a bad habit. Im glad you like it but i dont know how to start it off. im almost done with the rough draft but i keep changing things. :p thanks for your comments i really take them to heart

Already I like your character, Hannah, and I have a bit of a feel for Jesse as well (as it so happens, I have a close guy-friend named Jesse as well, haha :)
Anyway, so far your descriptions are good; but be careful, you tend to use a lot of run on sentences. One more little tip, you want "our" instead of "are" in some places :) otherwise, very good, can't wait until you add more