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Cool it was real good, the font was a little large though but it was fantastic

Howz U?
C u on monday.
carefull of the spelling mistakes.
you spellt minute-miniut.
hich is incorrect.
And try to put more information into the story because it kinda like saying.
I went too canada.
I got a pony.
I rode away.
I got a job.
I'm dead.

Its kind like wht your doing. Put more emphasis into the story and you should get more people to read it. Watch out for the way they say things. you might want to change the font when your speaking from the diary and when he is talking change font aswell.
do at least 10 pages every chapter. Your putting 2 pages into 1 chapter and the less information you put into the story the more confusing it is.
and im very confused.
but your doing a gr8 job. good luck and i'll c u on the bus monday.

ive written more now

ive written more now

I will read more as soon as you post it. Serena