BookRix

I am so sorry that you had to deal with that. i hope that your brother and friend found each other in the next life and are happy together now. Its never easy when you lose someone to suiced. I was ready to kill my self and almost did a couple times. I wont ever do it again after reading this.

I am so sorry that you had to deal with that. i hope that your brother and friend found each other in the next life and are happy together now. Its never easy when you lose someone to suiced. I was ready to kill my self and almost did a couple times. I wont ever do it again after reading this.

That was the shortest story I have ever read. I'm sorry for your loss. Hope all goes well. Keep writing.

omg omg omg, this book was so awesome and sad, it made me cry. keep writing! don't ever give up.

xoxoxoxoxo,
-shexyauthors

This is a sad story. I hope that other young people will also read this because there's really a moral lesson behind everything that happened to them.

ik it does bc i was like my best friend i was in a state of depression 2 were i was cutting myself but the i met this guy and he pulled me out of tht depression but on my 14th b-day he broke my heart now i'm back in tht depression and hoping 2 get out of it soon...but i can't do it without help and so far i have none.

Truly a sad sad story....love can really hurt...and betrayal cuts so deep.
Laz

ur advice is pretty good

A quick word of advice, the drabble's contest stated that when you enter you needed 3 100 word drabbles in a book. This poem that you've written is very good, this is just from a fellow writer to another, I'm not trying to be mean or catty, or anything like that. I write a lot of stuff like this though, based on real experienes as well. Very, VERY good poem. I'll vote even though I'm participating in the contest :)