BookRix

thanks but i am working on fixing it as i work on my new book

i liked it but you have made alot of mistakes [spelling]

this is very good!!!!! tell me when u write another book! <3

awsome

Thank You Very Much I Am Working On The Next One And I Am Working On Fixing It : D

This story is written well that made me feel the nativity in it. The story beautifully reflected the way people talk English and live their lives there. If you have run your spell check and fixed the spelling and punctuation errors, you will not have missed the clear flow of writing. Unfortunately these mistakes disrupt the flow of writing. Keep writing.