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Social injustice is a hard subject in any written form,but you have done a wonderful, poignant job, sir.

Excellent poems! Excellent telling of what this world has become, and sadly, heading toward even more.

Perhaps if our worse can be display so eloquently we might be able to turn around.

each new line i read impresses me more and more until i feel my own poems brought to shame. you are an amazing writer! when you have enough, i think you could definitely sell your work in some kind of poetry collection.

i'm wondering if you read much about human rights and where you get your inspiration?

I am very glad you found me out here in the multiverse, Typhen. on hubpages I often fo on rants and attack the rich fat bastards fro their lack of compassion and their mindless gluttony. Sometimes I feel I am alone out here railing against the many wrongs of society. I am not alone. You are with me, wherever you are, and I am grateful. I must say the first poem, while very long, was very poignant and reminded me of some old school metal bands like Testament and Fates Warning. They would tackle sociatal and world issues like these and you have done so equally well. In fact, if I was still in a band i am sure it could be an epic ten minute long song and I would be begging your permission to turn it into one. Just awesome and love the way you brought the first verse back in the end, very well done, you are a wordsmith of the highest order.

Unabashed, raw, naked truths. Society as a whole should hang its collective head in shame.
Well told!

Yeah, your poems never do lose their power do they? This selection seems more brutal, more gruesome in a way, but that helps and it gains more and more momentum, delivering a more powerful message. You speak of different topics, you use different words but your style is still there, and you always deliver a massage. What is great is that you create emotion so easily, that is your greatest power. Well done, now I'm waiting for your next collection already.

Well this was amazingly powerful. Though I loved them all, my favorite was the first poem. You captured the plight of a beggar who lived and died with nothing. Though it is hard to face and read about social injustices, it is also very necessary. I hope that you keep writing things along this theme.
-Angely