I am super super super sorry to tell you this but I didnt really like it.
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I have to agree with Judy this is a unique story keep it up girl, hope I'll be able to finish this one soon as well :)
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What a wonderful beginning of what I believe will be a fabulous, unique story! I can tell you had a lot of fun writing this, and because you've made the characters so real, they're very real to you.
I know this is the beginning, so I'm sure you'll be doing some deep edits later. There are problems with tense, grammar, paragraph formatting and one or two minor spelling errors, but for the most part, this is very well-written.... mehr anzeigen
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Thank you so much! I really appreciate it! :)
Well, I didn't read this when you put it up back in 2012, but I'm glad I finally found it.
Did you revise following Judy's comments? I was very impressed with what I read.
Thanks, @snowmassgirl ! I'm uploading some more soon :) school is a pain in the butt.
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Thank you so much! It means a lot! :)
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