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It was good, but I suggest removing the notes and either adding them as a comment marked as important or incorporating them into the blurb.

I really liked this :) Exceptionally well told, nice twists I didn't see coming, and full of emotion! Need a few punctuation corrections, but otherwise a fantastic little story!

This story is so beautifully told, it deserves to be edited to fix the spelling and grammar errors. Others have told similar stories, but I don't think I've read one where the person is not only still alive, but has the opportunity to say goodbye before dying. I also like the timing of the "twist" you put on it. Excellent, clever, and aside for a the normal mistakes a new writer makes, this was extremely good. You clearly have a lot of natural talent, and I hope you continue to write! ')