Wow, your writing style is very sensitive. I found it very enjoyable to read and would like to know how to proceed. Your pictorial descriptions are so unique and I've never read before in these costumes. Very creative.
Nadi
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Quite descriptive. An interesting read. Keep Writing. You know how to prompt the reader to read more.
All the best.
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Very melodramatic ... perhaps that's too drastic. Very dramatic account of a young girl's feelings of guilt over a close friend's apparent suicide and the revelation it might have been murder. It's well done and I suspect a spell binder that will receive wide acclaim. You have a magic quality to your expressive writing and I predict you will go far. Thank you for sharing and best of luck with this project.
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Thank you. Your comment is very encouraging and is a real confidence booster, I'm always worried about posting things online. Thank you for checking it out, it means a lot.
Constructive Criticism is welcome. Please comment.
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Thank you!