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I love this its the first warrior book on here that's in English !!

A question
Why did Whitekit/paw and Foxkit/paw act weirdly towards Mistylake?

You have written this story, as with the first, with your young audience in mind. The story has a simple plot that I believe young children will enjoy. The names you have come up with your characters are very charming and apt for the young audience as well. There are a few errors in punctuation and capitalization. Some of the contractions with possessive nouns/pronouns or missing the apostrophe (e.g. cant--should be can't). And I noticed you did not capitalize "i" when it comes in the middle of a sentence--it is capitalized regardless of where it appears in the sentence. There are also some misspellings. I know it is very, very difficult to edit your own work--we tend to read the story as we check for mistakes and often miss them.