Hmm...it's a very simple, delightful little tale, Gold. I hope you've written a few more original stories like this one. If i had a suggestion for you it would be this: try to lengthen the next one just a bit. Give yourself time to more fully develop all the characters :)
Thank you for putting this little gem up!
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thank you for appreciating it! I'll try writing more stories like this, and as you said lengthen them a bit. : )