BookRix

Is your cover from the sims?

If you need my help, you know how to find me. ^^ I can help you with your spelling mistakes and errors and it would be an honour to help a fellow writer and friend. XD
:)

Regards,
Rin

WOAH! SEH MY FRIEND IS A BUDDING AUTHOUR DO REMMEBER ME WHE YOU BECOME A FAMOUS WRITER K?

WOAH! SEH MY FRIEND IS A BUDDING AUTHOUR DO REMMEBER ME WHE YOU BECOME A FAMOUS WRITER K?

............ thks anyway ^_^.... there are errors? LOL XD still dying with errors >.<

You asked me to read it, so I did. I would say there is a lot of room for improvement. The mistakes that are most commonly made would be grammar and spelling, the usual mistakes you always make.
Well, edit your book sometime soon with the spelling and grammar errors gone, other than that, the book was not bad. :)

You asked me to read it, so I did. I would say there is a lot of room for improvement. The mistakes that are most commonly made would be grammar and spelling, the usual mistakes you always make.
Well, edit your book sometime soon with the spelling and grammar errors gone, other than that, the book was not bad. :)

You asked me to read it, so I did. I would say there is a lot of room for improvement. The mistakes that are most commonly made would be grammar and spelling, the usual mistakes you always make.
Well, edit your book sometime soon with the spelling and grammar errors gone, other than that, the book was not bad. :)