Awakening

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Awakening
Two hunters. One who created her, the other who is sworn to eliminate her race. Only one can win her heart. Dark and light. Love or hate. Love dances on a very fine line.

Stichwörter: 
vampire, hunting, blood
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Gelöschter User

Is your cover from the sims?

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Rin Tan Qian Yong

If you need my help, you know how to find me. ^^ I can help you with your spelling mistakes and errors and it would be an honour to help a fellow writer and friend. XD
:)

Regards,
Rin

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glenda.603

............ thks anyway ^_^.... there are errors? LOL XD still dying with errors >.<

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Rin Tan Qian Yong

You asked me to read it, so I did. I would say there is a lot of room for improvement. The mistakes that are most commonly made would be grammar and spelling, the usual mistakes you always make.
Well, edit your book sometime soon with the spelling and grammar errors gone, other than that, the book was not bad. :)

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Rin Tan Qian Yong

You asked me to read it, so I did. I would say there is a lot of room for improvement. The mistakes that are most commonly made would be grammar and spelling, the usual mistakes you always make.
Well, edit your book sometime soon with the spelling and grammar errors gone, other than that, the book was not bad. :)

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Rin Tan Qian Yong

You asked me to read it, so I did. I would say there is a lot of room for improvement. The mistakes that are most commonly made would be grammar and spelling, the usual mistakes you always make.
Well, edit your book sometime soon with the spelling and grammar errors gone, other than that, the book was not bad. :)

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