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A mysterious car, situated in the back lot of a run-down dealership. A boy, just looking for an affordable automobile for college. But does the car have other intentions?

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Salem, Oregon

If there ever were an example of how corporate interests have taken over
legislation in this Country, this is it.
It appears that neither Ms. Deschamps could do much of anything, or, could the
police. They were hamstrung by the law. Those who wrote the laws, and those
who “paid” for the laws, the NRA, etc., are to blame.
Until the laws are changed, which likely is never, this wil be an increasingly
common... mehr anzeigen

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sk8888

Nice and compelling story, you like psychological thrillers? Check out my stuff from a first hand point of view.

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writersbug

I truly appreciate your high praise, sir. Thank you so much for reading my work, I really appreciate it, and I'm glad you liked it. Hopefully, I'll be able to get a few more on here soon. Thanks again!!!

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felixthecat

Excellent!
It just goes to show you; keep the distances travelled to a minimum, and for God's sake, don't give in to the temptation to put the pedal to the metal:)
You have it all here in this delightful short story. Good characters, well defined, great pace and grammar, but above all you have an INTERESTING plot with a real dilemma. This is the Hallmark of a successful story. The resolution left nothing to be desired, but it... mehr anzeigen

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