BookRix

no offense but... learn how to spell before u write a book! LOLZ

It doesn't make sense and i agree with rawrr01. You seem like you're rushing into it and the part about the mother and the two babies didn't seem like it fit in at all.

Alot of the comments are correct. You misspelled alot of words. This is a great series and if you really beilieve you have a good twilight book check with a fan before you post. I really enjoy the creativity but just try not to ruin the series
major twilight fan,
Rosy

wow

Awsome Diary ever wow this Auther has some good stuff and that's what we learn in class and I thought this was good if I graded this 1, being the worst 2, being ok 3, being great and 4, being the best u can write and I choose a 3 it was great.Great job Auther.........

the diary in all mumbo jumbo most doesn't make any sense why would a mother just have babies and turn them over it needed a reason and to go baby shopping for a new born child (not the clothing part) really just doesn't sound right, and many words missed spelled...

it could b better if it slowed down a bit its like u rushed it and dont go into detail if the story was fixed it would be good:)

this was poorly made

Don't mess it up. You didn't even put the punctuation in it. Maybe you shouldn't mess with the series.

need to work more how long did it take you to write this you misspeled like 50 tims try again you ruined the book once you said charlise had the babys then you said i walked in an charlie hd one in each arm come on wha are you six dont write if your gana do it wrong kk