The night my daddy murdered me

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The night my daddy murdered me
What happens when a father takes to far on his young son that can't defend himself?Will he care at all what he did?Read to find out.

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child abuse, murdered, father, son
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Kalai

Using the simple words, you have successfully written a poem about the physical abuse a child experiences. Your poem succeeded in creating images in the mind that shuddered with the pain of that helpless child. The arrogance of the man and the innocence of the child were impressively portrayed in this simple poem. Keep writing.

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gabbygirl1234

yeah I know.One time in my town a father was drunk and he ate his 4 year old's eye.It was so sad it made me sick.╯︿╰

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