BookRix

Ah the enthusiasm of a new writer! You do well on this story, I like the surprise ending, though I was hoping she would save the day by getting her hands on that darn sippy cup! You are a little rough on the sentence with the bagel and cream cheese, otherwise, good job! Robynn

Thanks Glad you liked it!! I had a lot of fun writing this one!

Absolutely ghastly! I have these kinds of nightmares when I've eaten Beer cheese and peanuts the night before:)
But...so well narrated:)