BookRix

It's rather short but it still hook me like a fish to a bait.

Really drew me in I keep reading it over and over again. Amazing writer.........I love youuuh!......there I said it. :]

P.S....I spent ages on the smiley face

Well written!

Zombie stories are either great or not great. I love this one. I could see and feel everything. It was well written and well shown. Nice job.

I love zombies and this story really piqued my interest. I'm hoping that you're planning to add more to it though... Yes?

And I was glad he did.

Voted.

Nicely done, loving zombies.

You're a good writer. Keep it up :)

"intestines trailing like morbid ribbons" very original. You're a master at strange imagery. I was very immersed in the setting throughout this story.

Really great story. And very well written. You are a very promising writer.
I'm not much into the whole "zombie" craze, but I found myself lost in the story.

Good job :)