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This is still in progress, any mistakes in this book will be corrected after book is done. Thanks ♡
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Aw, it seems a little sad so far, but I like it
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Thanks!
Good start, Faith.
You've chosen to open the book (I assume it's novel-length?) with a Prologue. Two things struck me: The first is the perspective from three different points of view. I THINK that's alright. At any rate, it reads well...but as they say, Prologues have their advantages, but also, for the novice writer (especially), dangers. Using both past and present pov is a little jarring. I wondered as I read if perhaps... mehr anzeigen
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Thanks! I try ^w^
And yes I see what your saying, I'll note that
Any updates yet? X
Agh, not yet. I'm not on bookrix often. I'll update soon
Same iv been looking around through wattpad but I came back to bookrix to see if the books I have read updated haha
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