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in so I have one almost ready to pout to Bookrix and I am in the process of writing another (more modern) story, Evelyn
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in so I have one almost ready to pout to Bookrix and I am in the process of writing another (more modern) story, Evelyn
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Excellent imagery, Evelyn, and I like how the town/setting matches up with the career/character of Henry/George. I like the very believable, no-nonsense mood of this one. And I'm glad the lady got that autograph, and I'm glad the son threw his dad a bone...as his father comes to terms with writing memoirs on BookRix.
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comments. Alwys happy to receive them, good or bad ha! I have a new book on the site now called Divine Recovery and I wikll shortly putting another one on so watch this space if you care to read my work. I was awake for hours last night and thought up a new story, went through... mehr anzeigen
very much. The story was so good I totally over looked any mistakes that were made. This was very descriptive to the point I felt I was there. The twist at the end was heart tugging. Loved it!
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Evelyn. The entire concept--the setting, the relationships, the sadness of the has-been. Everything spoke to my heart. You crafted this one so well. My compliments.
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Such a sad little tale... I like your description of the coffee, especially. A lot of us went the route of a traditional coffee shop for this contest, so it's refreshing to see a new take on it. Bravo, and good luck to poor Henry.
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for your kind words, and for reading my story. I did not want to do the tradition route. I do not, have not frequented coffee shops/places etc. as I not all that fond of coffee. There was a time when my once a year coffee was to have a Kenyan blend bean, ground up instore and... mehr anzeigen
their great review. Cannot do it separately for some weird reason. me and computers again, I guess) Sorry about any typos. I do edit but as someone said the other day, you never see all the typhos when editing yourdelf., Your mind goes into word blindness. Anyway. I have entered in Marc's newe comp. on Serious writers a story called Powerless. If anyone wants to have a read of another brand new story. I am cooking on gas... mehr anzeigen
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for your wonderful words. I am so pleased that you enjoyed my work andgave me such a good write up, I hope that i do not let you down in the future. These are on ly short stories and the longer haul is harder but I am going back to work on my novel soon. Evelyn
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Great writing and storyline. I wss there in the coffee shop and wanting to ask for an autograph as well. Seeing a man pick up from his tattered life, and living for a moment his glory. Looking forward to reading more of your stories.
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