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thanks again for the review. I have recently been thinking of gathering up my English stories and I will be trying to put them into some sort of compendium, as they seem to be the ones that are 'ready to go'. Evelyn/Bluedragon

catch up on my reviews. They get away from me as i am so busy. However, thanks again , for reading this piece. Evelyn/Bluedragon

Kind of you to read one of my small pieces. Thanks for the nice review also, Evelyn/bluedragon

answers abook review like this, does that person get it come through to them or just on the book page? Please, thank you, Evelyn and than ks again for reading my work.

words. I will look into the paragraph thing and wll probably do that, I have learned a lot more since I wrote it. A collection> I have been thinking along tnhose lines for my very 'English' stories and might do that some ti]ime in the future. So busy writing right now. Thanks again, Evelyn

Another great piece of flash Evelyn. You really must gather up all these shorts into a collection and publish them.

Just one little problem; you have a repeat at the end of this story and it could do with some paragraph breaks to help with reading. Will done

As I seem to be starting a trend of series books, I may just do that, when I hasve the time that is lol Thanks again, Evelyn/Bluedragon

As usual with your great works. You have transmitted a lot of thrills and excitement in a few pages. A totally enjoyable read, thank you.
Would make a good first story in a series as well.