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Bluedragon (Evelyn),

I love your story. It is so very hilarious. You did an excellent job at it too.

Exceptional writing!

renee321.2011 (Tonya)

Thanks, for a very enjoyable read.
Chris

I appreciate your fondness for this piece, Evelyn /Bluedragon

It is lovely to hear all these great comments on what was just a doodle really. I could never do it again, I don' think. Really haven't the time right now. But glad everyone has had some enjoyment out of this little piece. Evelyn/Bluedragon

Cry me a river as I laughed so hard, I shed tears!!!

Evelyn,

The poor, poor steward. Now, if I ever go on a cruise, I will be silently thinking of the many funny, embarrassing situations one might get into out at sea! Let me see, Love Boat, Operation Pink Petticoat, and a few other hilarious sea adventures are now rewinding in my head, Thank You!

The writing style is clean, the plot arc is perfect, the prose is fluid and the grammar correct.

What has happened on BookRix lately? Can I not find a story to criticize, even gently?

I aspire to write as cleanly as you have.

For all those leaving hearts and such..there is a nifty little button alongside the book, tweet! How about we leave a few short words on our favorites and give them a hand!

Gwen

I am pleased that you liked it and found something to laugh about in it. As I have told Valerie, where it came from nobody knows. Thanks again, Evelyn/Bluedragon

Thanks for reading this story and for your lovely comments. I am NOT normally a comic writer. Where this came from, who knows. I am just so glad that you got some fun out of it. I may be the only one I will ever write with humour! Evelyn/Bluedragon

I'm still laughing, remind me never to take a trip on the Wanderer. Evelyn, I knew the humour was lurking in the back of your mind. It just needed a little nudge. So well written as usual. Kudos girl it's a brilliant piece.I loved it.

Carol x

Evelyn, you KNOW you are one of my favorite authors here, and I always look forward to new stories from you. Thanks indeed to those who promoted "Cry Me." This is one of your best. Not only have you contained an entire story in a few pages, you have filled it with humor, tension, suspense and mystery -- all in one.

For those who want a quick read and a good laugh, from a story that is not only perfectly written but has NO typos and perfect grammar, CRY ME is the one.

Like everyone else, I highly recommend this adorable piece of what is probably "flash fiction" - due to its length. Read it. You won't be disappointed!

(I have a friend who always writes humerously). I must admit that several people found this amusing so I am heartened by your comments, than ks agin, Evelyn/Bluedragon