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tbh u have alot of spelling corrections

i like zebras too

I know right its all over the place

I know right its all over the plce

okaay. thanks this was just an idea i'm no where near done. But thanks for the advice.

one small suggestion? add some punctuation to your story. all the sentences run together which can be confusing to the reader (it was for me). so try breaking 'em up a little with commas, periods and question marks.