black snow

poems of cold changes Von:
User: esp3052x
black snow
for consideration
(c) 2009

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imaginary

you did put something together after all! good. I liked the fridge poems... were these done with those word magnets? it's a great medium :)

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esp3052x

yup. you're only the 2nd to guess. they are great. kind of freeing. thanks.

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dennisbressack

Really good imagery and great lines sprinkled throughout make this book a good and thoughtful read. My only suggestion is that in the editing, please note, sometimes the title or one word or one line appears on a page followed by the poem on the next page.
Peace,
Dennis

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esp3052x

yeah. thanks. i am aware, but don't know how to fix this. it is a REAL problem. i was searching for some sort of thing for page breaks but haven't found anything yet. but yes, thanks for pointing it out. it slipped my mind that i wanted to try and fix it.

regards
e.
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robottina

Hello 3ric,

I have intercepted your signal, and found it to be of excellent quality, free of static, and with ample bandwidth! I truly enjoyed all of your transmissions, but my favorites were "snow stomp" (because of the microchip imagery...so robotic!), "angels drift", and "depression's wings". Thank you for the shareware! If you'd like, please intercept my signal containing robotic poetry.
Good luck!
robottina

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esp3052x

sorry. having been assimilated back into the h-beings...my kraft don't werk real well. if i ever think of something to input, i will.

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sternschnuppe

Poetry written right from your Soul,
give yourself credit for knowing more than you think you do...
greetings Sternschnuppe!

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esp3052x

thanks. when you 'put yourself out there' it's nice to get such glowing feedback. am happy.

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