Hello all,
I have decided to re-add the first few chapters of my epic story The Lion of Eomar.
It was available to read quite a few months ago, but I took it down with the intention of completely scraping it. I have had a change of heart, and as a result I have added a fifth chapter.
If any of you are interested in reading this, then I recommend reading all the way through to the fifth chapter as I am told that it is my best... mehr anzeigen
Hello all,
I have decided to re-add the first few chapters of my epic story The Lion of Eomar.
It was available to read quite a few months ago, but I took it down with the intention of completely scraping it. I have had a change of heart, and as a result I have added a fifth chapter.
If any of you are interested in reading this, then I recommend reading all the way through to the fifth chapter as I am told that it is my best work.
You may find parts which have these (explain more ... etc.,). The idea is for self reference on ways to make the story more full. I am stuck in this process at the moment and will only continue into the sixth chapter once these problems have been resolved.
If you do decide to read this entry, then can you please make a comment on where you think my mistakes are as this would help me build the type of story you would like to read as much as I would.
Eric
