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A very detailed fight scene for sure. Good job.
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Hello, a friend of mine said that he had trouble reading through this, because it made him a little sick. When telling me this I thought, that was what I was aiming for. I'm not sure whether or not this is any good. But hey, why not let others decide!
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Thanks James. I have been told I'm reasonable at creating fight scenes. I want to write more fight scenes, but more large scale. However, the problem with those is deciding which characters to concentrate on. It becomes a long process very quickly!
Understandable. As a writer you best know what you want to convey in your stories and I can appreciate that. But as a reader I was not drawn into the story because of either character, but because of how detailed and vivid you made the fight scene.
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