Frumos Dezordine (Beautiful Disarray)

"You are mine, Disarray. te iubesc." Von:
User: emmy41
Frumos Dezordine (Beautiful Disarray)
Disarray wanted to help her younger brother pay for college. She wasn't doing the best she could at it. then Demani offers a job and a salary she can't deny.

Demani took one look at her and wanted one thing. her. he was a player, he knew it, and he wanted her to know it, too. All he had to do was whip out some pretty words in his native tonuge, right?

So, So, wrong.

Demani soons find out that Disarray is a încăpăţânat puţin fundul, or a stubborn little ass.

oh, how he loves that ass though.

Stichwörter: 
disarray, demani, modeling, love, players
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maximumridelover

Since its not fnished I don't know what your thinking of doing but, X-Rated means that you go into detail of what they do in bed or out of it depending on what kinda person your are (lol) Anyway I love the idea. I found it kind of hard to tell who was talking at what time but other than that you have done a smashing job :) Keep working on it please
Rate: 7/10

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kcline2

first of this was a very good start for your book and would love to read more. the only problem i had at all was actually seeing the writting but i made it. :) good job!

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