I agree that the narrative needs a little work but overall I thought it was a good story. Good job!
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Emery, I liked this....a lot. Wasn't expecting to, but I persevered and found your story very entertaining indeed. A new concept with an ending that could definitely happen if we continue to abuse our earth.
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